tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8248930288973481921.post7314663358076799939..comments2023-03-27T16:35:25.969-06:00Comments on Boy, Put that Wig Down: CoffeeOld Saphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17498122903676125424noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8248930288973481921.post-34995101713917036702013-01-28T11:56:49.731-07:002013-01-28T11:56:49.731-07:00On second read, I think you nailed it actually.On second read, I think you nailed it actually.Old Saphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498122903676125424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8248930288973481921.post-19551913705876785452013-01-27T22:03:10.120-07:002013-01-27T22:03:10.120-07:00I'm really impressed by how the scene becomes ...I'm really impressed by how the scene becomes super-imposed on another scene and so the two scenes exist in one space, without any explanation that that's what's happening. In other drafts, I think that's something to be played with further, but it's working really well here.Old Saphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498122903676125424noreply@blogger.com